Belinda - you are getting better and better with each passing piece. This one has a mostly simple composition and just like you said - a very standard Manga pose. There are a few anatomical issues here that perhaps if you might have spent more time at, you may have corrected... (for example, her chest appears to have slipped a bit, her legs appear a little contorted with respect to her torso, and that sort of stuff)... what you have really achieved however, is coming up with a soothing blend of colors to eventually develop a very decent image! A very commendable effort. And in time, you will continue to keep growing and getting better! [+7]

Yeah, you're really improving! Nice work with the hair, though it could use some bolder shadows, I think...
Well, keep up the good work.

The hair is great City,and the face as usual has a defined look to it.I think it could easily be taken to a whole new level.Things like shadows to define a light source,and different shades of color on the clothing.Working those pesky little details in there can make a huge dif.

If the quality of the clothes can match the very well done look of the skin and hair,you have a solid piece.I dont think the pose looks too generic,maybe I dont see enough anime stuff.Proportions look correct,and no anotomical issues.You know I'm not a fan of white b/g's,but if the character stands out enough,it works.That's the main reason a little more color could be used in the clothes,especially the shirt.

I hope I haven't rambled too much,you've got another solid foundation here.And if your intentionally going for this look?Diregard everything I've just said^_^

Thanks for the critiques, guys! All very constructive- I really appreciate it!

One thing I thought I should mention is that she's supposed to be leaning back on her right hand (the one you can't see). Are you supposed to be able to see some of that hand behind her back, or am I right to have it hidden? Same goes for her hidden foot, I think...

@  gridlock:
I didn't notice that about her chest- thanks for mentioning it! ^_^ I think her arms may be tucked in too close to her torso too, despite the puffy shoulder pads. Hm...Yep, should have spent more time on the initial sketch. I'm glad you still like it! I'm seeing the improvement myself, especially from my first GFX submission 'Raine'. Anyone remember what that was like?? Lol

@ Jie:
My first rendering of the hair was too washed out, so I added some darker shadows and brighter highlights. I think I might make a third sweep of this and darken the shadows some more. Thanks for the suggestion!

@ yerffej:
Lol, I'm not going to disregard your comment. I agree with your points, especially about details and the clothing. I'm trying to avoid white backgrounds myself, but for this particular piece I think I couldn't get away from it. I'll fiddle with the shirt colour and see if I can create some better contrast.

Thanks again for the critiques! I'll be working to make my next piccy better- I'm learning a lot behind the scenes.

Very nice piece. I was going to leave a critique suggesting shadows to show form and a light source, but it seems everyone beat me to it. Another thing I could suggest is to try using a background that isn't so white. If it were tinted a little darker, and some parts of the figure were brighter than the BG, then it would help to bring her forward and create some depth.

Good work.

Nice done, i like face and hair...Color is well done. But maybe need some shading in her cloth... i read critique and right you have improve a lot.
Good work !

This is great CityRose. You have been a big help to me and this is showing me how you did it instead of texting. Great Job and thanks

nice work

I've been following your artwork for a time, but havent commented on it so far I think. I would agree with Gridlock that you are getting better and better

I'm not sure if it is the anime style or a personal preference, but don't you think the fairy could use some more shading? Like the legs for example, or her skirt.

Excellent, far beyond my field of vision....................... : D you rock...



I think i'm the busiest guy on earth, at the moment

Damn girl, I just found this piece while bumbling around the site...why didn't you let me know you had a new one?

I think everything that could be said, has. I think what seems off to me is the lack of a tonal range in her legs, with them all flat they seem to disappear in comparison to the rest of the figure. Her hair looks great to me, and her expression is a nice mix of confidence and mischief.. Perhaps a bit of shading on the ground so she doesn't look as though she's floating there. Nice job

I've definitely picked up some points that I will avoid like the plague next time. The minimal shading of the clothes was done by choice because I gave a stab at anime. Next time I'll be sure to detail the clothing better. White backgrounds will be nonexistant also. ^_^

 Empty, I'm glad I could help you out a little! Keep practicing, you'll be kick@ss in no time!
 Wysiwyg, sorry I didn't let you know...my bad.

Thanks a bunch everyone! You've all been a huge help ^_^ Here, everybody have some cake! *hands out slices of cake*

Hi City Rose
I really like the style of your art. I also really enjoy seeing all the differences and growth that is evident in your work. I can say that I enjoy this one because it has a very playful presentation. I like the hearts a lot.
I am a fan of anime, but only slightly so because I can't say that I would have recognised this as a "generic anime pose". Even if it is, I don't think that should take away from this at all.
+8

I've always liked your art... remember I did try to recruit you for my project! LOL
I think she's perfect. Bravo.

Belinda, this is really very sweety character.
I like it so much.

Cool

Hiya  Gianna23
I'm glad you like it. ^_^ My sister didn't like the hearts actually, she said they weren't very mature. The point I made to her was....well.....Tumbleweed isn't an adult, is she? Hehe. It was a risk anyway. I'm glad someone liked them.
I think the pose is a little generic anime, coupled with the school-girl-type uniform. Search around the net and I'm sure you'll find plenty of anime pics with similar poses from all angles.

I'm happy to see you're still a fan  SoaLD I tell you what, you get back to me in 5 years. By then I should be able to draw everything. Lol

Thanks everyone!

Cool, but... I hate the background! Lol, only because I can't stand so many hearts and flowers at one time. It gets too much for me.

No it's really nice. Perhaps you could have shaded her eyes a bit...?

+6

Girls eyes....mystical....and beautiful!! You really managed to make a nice artwork! <3

She's got a cool shoe.

Great great great, I can see improvement. Love the colours and the pose you have used. Good anatomy too I'll give it a +8 and a keep it up!

Yeah she is funky and I love the pose. I think the hearts should go, but that takes nothing away from the picture. She looks like she did something naughty +6

very seductive and innocent at the same time. love it!

I agree...seductive and innocent at the same time. Nice combination!! Forgive me for taking so long to comment on this.

Lmao Jane, well I said that it was a risk.

ARTOONATOR, I'm gonna cherish that five star critique for the rest of my life. Lol. Thanks ^_^

Gary, not to worry! ^_^ We can all procrastinate together.

Thanks again peoples!

Ooooo I love the lips and the coloring on the hair n___n It looks so shiny :3

By the way thanks for the helpful critique/nice comment on my robby rabbit picture, I'm not sure how to reply to comments o I guess I'll just thank you here ><

Yeah, I actually wanetd to get the yucky edges effect on purpose, I think you're right and it made it look more muddy/dirty, I was kinda going for that effect XP

But you're also right on the blood around his mouth, I should have gotten much more detailed there x___X

and actually I don't use photoshop, I used corel painter 8 for that picture X3

and I just got corel painter 9! HOORAY! -draws- oh yeah, and I didn't trace the image, I just kinda looked at it on my miniature-monitor while I drew it on my main one X3 <3

Pefect manga style, veeeeeeeeeeeeery nice

aw, thats very cute! i love her eyes, hair and smile!

Very cute! ^__^